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I always need more than one friend!
Friendship flows here
and there
Friendship flows
everywhere
All the things you
never see
Were all the things
that were meant to be.
But one day they
ignored me very bad
They did it everyday
and it made me really mad
And then[really]i
started to cry
And their plea[really
was just a lie!
Friendship day will
fly by soon
I'm sitting aside,I've
lost my tune
They were never bad
they never lied,
Our sweet friendship
had just now died.
But one day we met by
the stream,
I admitted i was a
little mean
Her mouth broke up her
eyes gleamed
And that's what
happened down the stream
Friendship day will
fly by soon,
I'm sitting next to
them,I've found my tune
We promised that we'd
never lie
OUR SWEET SWEET
FRIENDSHIP WILL NEVER DIE!!!!!!1
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2 comments:
Woo jenni....arivaali kavithayyaaa oru pillaiyae vachu irukinga...chance ee illa jenni so talented n versatile she is. Roomba azhagana rasanai nirancha ponnu...so soft n sweet hearted also. I am proud for u....say my happiness with plenty if wonders to her.
Sudha
Very good attempt. There are places where emotion dominates. the idea of friendship is fully brought out. next time she will have to concentrate on the rhythm
Vincent
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